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Teng 递交于2005-4-20    Edit/Delete
its a romantic story..overall its
quite interesting but just a
little bit too common..just like
other romantic story..the only
weakness for this story is not too
detail in describing the main
characters emotion and
feeling..anyway u alrdy done a
good job and keep on to write more
good novel...