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1149230845 递交于2010-4-5    Edit/Delete
我一定要找到九难十魔找到雪儿
3712381 递交于2009-10-4    Edit/Delete
为什么是个悲剧, 独孤怎么就死了呢,还
有,香姑怎么就做了尼姑.其实可以另外一
个结果的.怎么就 你稍微改一下 就
那么改一下以难吗??
你爹 递交于2009-2-21    Edit/Delete
你简直就是个白痴 不会写就别写 真是个
废物
天涯·末日 递交于2008-5-27    Edit/Delete
www.8812345.com里有九难十魔
another chinese 递交于2005-6-19    Edit/Delete
To the jerk with the namesake "girl
in college": I have Chinese input
software (not "chinese character
conversion program"), and my high
speed internet connection is 3 mb
(256 mb is computer memory, not
network connection, retard) with 1 G
DDR memory on my laptop. But I
still prefer to type comments in
English since it's faster for me,
it's none of your business.

BTW, I bet you're Chinese too since
your english is embarassingly
shallow (ha!). Just take a look at
your usage of "nauseatingly
embarrassing", "disappointingly
dull", trying desperately to sound
like a critic by piling on long (and
common) words. I bet that's as far
as your understanding of literature
critique and your vocabulary go.
Then again, if you're actually a
native speaker, that's really sad,
'cause it's understandable for
Chinese to have bad English, but for
you it's a different story.

My advice to you: Get a grip or take
a hike, gal.
求败者 递交于2005-5-2    Edit/Delete
令狐庸,你给我小心点,妈B的写的什么
垃圾小说,让我知道你在哪我肯定先杀了
你,操女全家!!全世界买人说令狐庸住
址,请联系13970225518,我要杀了他,
谢谢大家合作,他日必有后报,你别说我
神经,等着看吧,再杀几个人算不了什
么!
flashthander 递交于2004-12-4    Edit/Delete
独孤是死的,在这位先生笔下
我没有笔名 递交于2004-11-28    Edit/Delete
雪儿的事迹在《九难十魔》之中,另有叙
述。) 看完了我就急急忙忙的上网查,就
是没有看到啊 。看到好多人都想知道雪儿
的后来是怎么样了》那个独孤求败怎么那样
girl in college 递交于2004-9-10    Edit/Delete
alright ppl, stop commenting in
english when your grammar suck.
it's nauseatingly embarrassing to
read. honestly, just download the
chinese character conversion
programs. they're free and easy,
even with the slow 256 mb
connection. i know you're all
chinese for obvious reasons and
it's understandable that your
grammar isn't perfect. but i've
read comments where ppl attempt to
sound hip by using cuss words and
just end up sounding like plain
morons. seriously, you're better
than that. stop embarrassing
yourselves.

btw.. i haven't read this story
yet.. but i started one other <<
da xia fong qing yang >> (i hope i
spelled that correctly since my
pingying needs a lot of work) by
the same author. it read
disappointingly dull and the word
choice was quite generic. a boring
read in general. my advice? don't
waste your time.
漂泊 递交于2004-8-4    Edit/Delete
故事在27章以前,文体很流畅,把金庸先
生没有的浪漫发挥的淋漓尽致。但在27章
的时候就觉的在读文章的时候有点牵强
了。决的好象不是一个人所写的了,好象
一个先生写的序,学生写的尾。没有韵味
了。
我很喜欢令狐庸先生写的书,觉得他把金
庸先生写书里没有的浪漫发挥的淋漓尽
致。有了一代宗师的风范了。
所以,我希望先生您也要写自己武侠世
界。不要接别人的序与尾了。
白莲骑士 递交于2004-5-27    Edit/Delete
这位先生的笔力很好,但就是不象金庸
的,金的没这么浪漫,到有点俗气。
令狐先生不愧为成人童话大师,在二十世
纪九十年代的商品岁月里,还能写出纯真
年代的心声,尽管跨掉的一代不愿意看,
我还是要说好。
你爸 递交于2004-5-23    Edit/Delete
对呀!~作者是怎么写的?????人物都
没有交代清楚就完了!?我看他妈的一定没
有写作的常识1?!~~
它的评价该是!!!~特差#·
想知道雪儿的将来 递交于2003-11-26    Edit/Delete
是呀。有谁知道九难十魔是谁写的呀。还
有在网上是查不到的呀。哎`~我很想看看
雪儿以后会是什么样子。她的天真和痴
情。我很喜欢。九难十魔。我什么时候才
能看到。哎`~~看了两遍了。觉得独孤求
败写的挺好的。但是中间有一段不知道为
什么没有写。就是在和海底的时候是怎么
和毒姑遇见的??有点蒙呀 ~~~~~~~
希望有人能知道九难十魔。谢谢```~~
fas 递交于2003-8-10    Edit/Delete
他妈的怎么这么多人看中文书却用洋文
评,显自己有本事啊!!!我操
急盼望告知 递交于2003-4-27    Edit/Delete
雪儿的事迹在《九难十魔》之中,另有叙
述。)还有个问题,为什么“独孤”后来
没想到“雪儿”,他不是也知道,雪儿会
在一月之后,在海边等他回来吗?他先回
来后,为什么不等“雪儿”而又去找“剑
魔”比武,直到书的结尾,我也没看到
“独孤”想到过“雪儿”一点,到底这是
为什么?难道“独孤”封存了和雪儿相处
那段日子的记忆了吗?我受不了。
在哪儿??雪儿在哪儿??那本“九难十
魔”这书在哪儿啊。求大家能帮我找到这
本书,非常感激。非常非常
月夜孤鬼 递交于2003-3-27    Edit/Delete
文理不清。毫无文采。情节生硬。不仅
如此你连最起码的写作功底都没有!
哎!!!!
我也不想多做评论了!总之一个字差!
递交于2002-10-12    Edit/Delete
结局交代的不清不楚。
阿共 递交于2002-9-28    Edit/Delete
你写的内容时间没有一片对,首先,这位剑
魔竟然和洪七,欧阳峰如果在一个时间,那
么<<风流老玩童>>里的那位白眉应该是那里
崩出来的。白眉不是说:“他在海外都1百
几十年了,他师傅2百多岁年龄。”你这是
不是没有人物写了,才故意这样把金庸里的
人物都写在一起。
wde 递交于2002-9-11    Edit/Delete
Does he really love Xiang Gu?
charleslee38 递交于2002-8-12    Edit/Delete
Good.
迭名 递交于2002-2-20    Edit/Delete
不错不错
zy 递交于2001-8-16    Edit/Delete
看后颇为后悔.写了这许多女子,却博而不
精.主体不够明确.bad
Linda 递交于2001-4-2
I likes the girl called Xiang Gu,
she's kindly and smarty,I don't
really like the other girls.
古江枫 递交于2001-3-10
我不喜欢那里面的女人
123 递交于2000-12-23
更沙比 chiyim 递交于2000-8-29
I've read this novel in two weeks. There are just a few funny moments in
it, but the most atractieve of this story is the main-character himself.
In lots of other stories and films you will see that his name had been
mentioned. Here you finally know why he called the undefeatable swordsman