| 路人乙
| 递交于2005-3-24
不真实,故事情节很曲折,人物也很立体
但环境与时间交待的不好,给人一种镶嵌
感,过于做作。 |
| 大明
| 递交于2004-11-21
这本收还可以看了,描写人物的心理还是
比较到位的。这样的结尾让人有较大的想
象空间。只是书名起得不怎么样。 |
| xiyangbaixue
| 递交于2004-9-17
希望读者们不要带着其他的色彩看待文
章,做为文学作品本人很喜欢作着的文
笔,展现在我眼前的是一幅凄美的画面. |
| xiyangbaixue
| 递交于2004-9-17
希望读者们不要带着其他的色彩看待文
章,做为文学作品本人很喜欢作着的文
笔,展现在我眼前的是一幅凄美的画面. |
| 868686
| 递交于2003-12-18
那些去日本的人,所谓留学!?
锤子!还不是为了自己以后的日子过的舒
服。在中国,在现在你可以学习到很多。
至于去小日本吗? |
| souldecision
| 递交于2003-3-4
What the H is wrong with this story?
Whoever wrote this story must be a
a**hole!!!!! This book sucks. |
| Zulu
| 递交于2003-1-3
Tenno = A. Hitler = SS = Hermann
Goring = I.Y
That guy should get a life!!! |
| 强行退出
| 递交于2002-10-30
To Tenno:
where r u come from?
a chinese betrayer,of a japanese
pig?
did u know what are you saying?
the slavish mind,of the inferiority
complex?
maybe whatever you are is not
important,but you should envisage
the history,which is full of
chinese blood and the peoples'
tears!
what a lousy nation,i have
everything from japanese except the
fasinating but dirty girls,i have a
dream that one day ,i could invade
Tokyo,kill all the male japan
pig,and use our weapons ,fuck all
the disingenuous women!
i am sincerely waiting the coming
days! |
| Tenno
| 递交于2002-10-24
To:Funny
Fuck you Funny!!!
Fuck you for swearing at Japanese
people!!!
Fuck you for pretending that you
love China!!!
Fuck you for your fuckin' name!!!
FUCK YOU!!! |
| Tenno
| 递交于2002-10-24
To:Funny
Fuck you Funny!!!
Fuck you for swearing at Japanese
people!!!
Fuck you for pretending that you
love China!!!
Fuck you for your fuckin' name!!!
FUCK YOU!!! |
| overseas chinese
| 递交于2002-9-20
A love story may seem more
powerful/interesting/exotic when
based on the theme of inter-racial
relationships. But a responsible
author should explore the "racial"
content more thoroughly if it was
to be used as the featuring
attraction. I wish you'd spent
more words on the Chinese
characters' impression of the
Nanking Massacre, rather than
describing the Japanese
characters' warm fuzzy memories of
post WWII Japan. |
| 胡子一把
| 递交于2002-9-16
结尾交代的不够清楚,内容不错,继续努
力。 |
| vuxen
| 递交于2002-2-1
整個一個瞎編﹐希望不要再用這種小說﹐誤
導中國人了。 |
| 在日学子
| 递交于2002-1-15
结尾不好,给人金荔耍了日本老头的感觉,
本想看到不同民族,不同年龄的人如何产生
爱情。
另外,用大量篇幅写安代的母亲,文不对
题。建议另写一部小说,叫“一个混血儿的
母亲”。 |
| mtwen
| 递交于2002-1-5
I applaude the author's resolve in
writing this novel. Literature wise
it is not a very good one, but to
have the courage to do so is
commendable.
Keep up the good work. |
| funny
| 递交于2002-1-4
fuck you, asshole.
you dream there is any good
Japanese?! When these animals
invade, or in their words enter your
home and rape your mother, your wife
and your daughter, you will know.
Kill all japanese animals. |