欧阳云是姓欧还是复姓欧阳？如姓欧阳则不
能说你们欧家如何如何(包括大知识分子林
枫)，如是单姓欧，就不能叫她欧阳。
And, so many errors, for
example,- the second motif of a
work including many movements
should regularly appear in the
first movement, of course, it can
reappear in the last one.
A not bad story, but the
advices for the author is to
improve the music knowledge -
basically, you can spend more
to describe the piano playing,
the violin playing, and so on.
And, the named concerto is not
a good idea, especially "River
of Love" - seems to popular.
One suggestion is a nameless
concerto, with the motif as a
river of love.
Please pay attention to a case
that a violin concerto
including piano is not always a
good idea. And, Miss Bai, the
"chief", never means a pianist!
There is no pianist as a
regular member of an orchestra!