*sniff**sniff* this is a very
touching story... *sniff* i think
i need more tissue...
文章的用意还是不错的,情节也较为引人,
但是结构不够严谨,显得松散凌乱,
文章很好！！！！！！！！
| dreamy princess | 递交于2004-9-7
*sniff**sniff* this is a very touching story... *sniff* i think i need more tissue... |
| 啊 门 | 递交于2003-3-12
文章的用意还是不错的,情节也较为引人, 但是结构不够严谨,显得松散凌乱, |
| 恬絮 | 递交于2002-10-4
文章很好！！！！！！！！ |